Inappropriate Meme of the Day

All in fun, of course.

Nuff Said. 😀

How Porn Often Leads to BAD Sex

Yesterday, I promised a rant about how bad sex seems to be an increasingly growing problem. So, it’s time to deliver.

Image via BBC.com

Porn is One of Two Root Causes:

We will tackle the second one in the very near future. Porn goes first because everything I see convinces me that it’s leading the way in amplifying the problem. For what it’s worth, I don’t think it’s all bad, just that people are unable to put things in perspective, and differentiate what they see on their computer screen and how real life works.

With porn sites all over the internet, it’s become increasingly common for men and women to check out adult videos. The trouble here is that in a society where nobody talks to anyone anymore, it’s also where too many guys (and some women) get their impressions about what sex is supposed to be like. So what’s wrong?

Seduction and romance are completely missing for starters. That creates unrealistic expectations about what it takes to get a woman into bed, and that relationships take effort.

It Promotes a Lack of Foreplay:

Lack of foreplay is another issue. It’s been a problem forever, but has only gotten worse with the advent of internet porn. I don’t care how good you THINK you are in bed or how good you look, women are rarely ready to go at the drop of a hat. A woman’s body takes time to “warm up”, and it’s NOT a matter of “touch here, then here, then there and bang!” Erogenous zones or hot spots vary (at least in responsiveness) AND there’s a need to show emotion too. Even if it’s just a casual hookup, she wants to feel deeply physically desired.

image via Astroglide.com

I also covered foreplay in a previous post or two. The advantages to it are that the more you take the time to get her turned on, the more intense and frequent her orgasms will be. It promotes physical intimacy, increased desire and lowered inhibitions. That last part means she’s less likely to turn down any kinky ideas you may have. No still means no however.

Even in Porn, Orgasms Are Sometimes Faked:

Yes, believe it or not, it’s true. This is an example of how Viagra has actually hurt the adult industry as well. Porn companies can hire pretty boys with no skill, give them the Viagra and throw them in front of a camera. Meg Ryan was MOSTLY right in “When Harry Met Sally” that it’s hard to tell if a woman is faking an orgasm… unless she’s so not into the act that she only goes through the motions of even faking the orgasm. I’m seeing it fairly often in porn nowadays. Here’s a few things to look for:

1. Her nipples never get fully erect, and no goosebumps around them.
2. Her “moaning” sounds mechanical
3. Her body never tenses up when she orgasms
4. She quickly separates herself from him after he finishes, sometimes barely hiding a look of disdain.

None of these are perfect indicators, except maybe the last one. The gal in the pic above, for example, doesn’t have fully erect nipples. She DOES have goosebumps all around them however. Generally speaking though, even a woman without responsive boobs will have her nipples fully erect as she gets close to and during a strong orgasm. Likewise a weak orgasm may not lead to muscles tensing up, but a good orgasm generally does.

My point here is that if even the porn star with the giant dick can’t make them cum half the time, porn probably isn’t the best learning material.

Porn Almost Always Minimizes Sexual Technique:

This one requires little explanation. Suffice it to say that there is MUCH more to sex than size or putting it in and pounding away. Size helps, especially when it comes to reaching “the Deep Spot”, just below the cervix. Too big hits the cervix and causes her pain however. IF you doubt me, watch and see how rare it is for a “giant” guy to get fully “balls deep” into the actress he’s partnered with for a scene. They’ll typically end up in positions that don’t allow full penetration.

LONG story short, even if you can get orgasms out of her with just pounding away, you’ll get more frequent and intense orgasms via skills like the Coital Alignment Technique and other Eastern tricks I’m aware of (and will share eventually).

Porn Vastly Distorts Domination and Submission:

What I’m talking about here is that porn always seems to eliminate consent and trust building aspect of a real Dom (or Domme) and Sub relationship. What always seems to end up being portrayed instead is rough sex with little or no consent. When tried out in the real world, this can lead to damaged trust or even domestic violence and sexual assault charges.

Rough sex isn’t really my thing, BUT as long as it’s consensual that’s all good and well. However, while domination MAY include rough sex, rough sex is NOT domination. I think this “meme” says it best:

THAT kind of relationship takes trust built on honest and open communication by both parties and a realization by the would be dominant that it’s their job to make the submissive feel safe and nurtured, not just use her as a fuck toy. When a woman submits as described above, it’s because she’s developed a deep trust that she will be safe, protected and is truly treasured.

That “fuck toy” mentality is what I’ve seen more and more of over the years however. I’ve counseled several women that wanted to explore their submissive side but were being pursued by predators who told them if they were submissive they had to obey immediately and without question. Those were abusers who can’t handle a real relationship, NOT dominants.

Likewise, grabbing a woman’s throat has become so en vogue that it’s in almost every video out there now. NEVER do that without talking about it ahead of time, even if it’s just holding without choking. You can scare the hell out of a woman that way. Autoerotic asphyxiation attempts are even scarier, and have occasionally resulted in death on top of failing at hitting that more intense orgasm. The woman that’s truly into being choked is fairly rare. In my opinion, if you don’t get permission first, you belong in jail.

Porn Creates Unrealistic Expectations For Women Also:

No, I’m not talking about body image. That’s a given anymore with porn actresses often having unnaturally large boobs, rears, eyelashes and even lips now. I see little need to beat that dead horse any further.

I’m talking about sexual performance. There are multiple angles here also. First there’s expecting the guy to go an hour like the porn star. Nevermind the porn star is on Viagra, and doing that starlet in front of the camera has probably become mundane as a gynecologist’s job is to him or her.

For her, there are possible expectations of wild flexibility, deep throating (which can leave her throat raw and sore), and having the leg strength to ride cowgirl for extended periods of time. What II find can be more frustrating for the guys however, is the belief that once she’s on her back or being taken from behind that she can just turn into a pillow princess (the new polite term for a dead lay).

Yes, Ladies, I’m picking on you a little here as well. If you want to keep your partner happy, it’s not enough to just lay there and (fake?) orgasm. Kissing, caressing, and communicating are also important. Probably the most important “trick” you can learn is to be able to keep a grip down there by doing your kegels or similar pelvic floor strengthening exercises. Done right, that move can put YOU in control even if you’re a submissive being bent over the edge of the bed by your dom.

Conclusion:

It’s quite simple. Never substitute porn for genuine technique and passion if not love or affection. Open and honest communication is vital as well to maintaining a healthy, happy relationship in and out of bed. In fact, LACK of communication is the other factor in bad sex, and I’ll be discussing that soon.

New Character Biographies Posted

I’ve been working on a handful of character biographies for my Witchfire stories. First, I started with Witchfire herself, and cleaned up some of her weaknesses and powers. Subtle but it’s there. I also changed her top back to a corset after finding one in the character builder that I liked, and cleaned up her hair. I liked the idea of wavy hair for her, but the pieces I put together for her last style just didn’t blend together smoothly at all.

The new look is simple, clean and comfortable, although I do still wish I could have gotten a bit of a wavy look to it. The new look follows my belief that keeping things simple is usually better though. Speaking of which; here’s her new costume:

The corset should be easier to get in and out of. Important in naughty stories. 😉

Aside from Witchfire, I did biographies for three characters created at DangerBabeCentral.com (where all this madness started, lol). Witchfire’s girlfriend Amazing Babe has a biography now, and I expanded upon the existing mini-biographies for Mister X’s characters Omega Woman and Battle Sprite.

For Amazing Babe and Omega Woman, I used pictures from DangerBabeCentral to show their costumes, then created some renders for their street clothes and less.

Battle Sprite was a one story character who only appeared for a few panels at DBC. I decided to challenge myself to make her into a more legitimate character. See for yourselves how it worked.

Note also that all the biographies have an intimate details section at the bottom. The measurements are because I write for men and women. The rest is notes for me to help keep each character unique when I get to the kinky parts. Readers can use the info to get a little better understanding of each character.

Tomorrow, since I’m getting close to publishing again, I’ll talk about the concept and goal behind the Witchfire series, and a tiny bit about where it’s going.

A Sneak Preview

I’m finally back in the saddle again, writing. I’ve got the first half chapter of my Witchfire reboot done. A rough first draft of it anyway. I guarantee the final draft full chapter will knock your socks off when it’s released.

I’m going to start working on projects outside of this Witchfire series also. I think I’m getting close enough to publish worthy writing. I have to be willing to stumble a bit at first anyway. Otherwise I won’t grow.

Gotta say I’m disappointed that people just hit Like without reading or replying to the last post also. I could have used the feedback. It’s part of life at WordPress though.

Anyway… On with the show!

Witchfire Redux – Chapter 1

The Reboot

Introduction or Spoiler / Update for Readers:

As people who were following my series may recall, I’d been planning a “reboot” of the series for a couple of episodes.  Krystal’s / Witchfire’s looks had evolved, as had her origin.  I was unhappy with various parts of my storytelling thus far also.  Her relationship with the She-Legion had more poorly planned ups and downs than a CW television series relationship.  I think I was being a little too shy about the peril theme of DangerBabeCentral as well.

With that in mind, and not wanting to put readers through multiple more chapters working towards a reboot, I’m jumping right into it.  This will start a few weeks after Chapter 11 ended in the old series and will have Krystal sent back to Day 1.  The story can be read from here for new readers, but the gap in that two weeks will be filled in via conversation for long term readers who want a sense of cohesion.

Krystal / Witchfire will be based on her evolved origin, and I’m going to make the stories more risqué as well.  I don’t want to give away the surprise, but suffice it to say I’ve found a way to throw a monkey wrench into the works for Witchfire and the She-Legion also.  This will be far more than a simple retelling of the chapters thus far.  For non-suspense readers, I’ll also be revealing a little more info about the bad guys and their plans at a quicker pace than before.

With the permission of Deanna Troi and ComixFana, I’ll be borrowing their characters and occasionally putting a spin on Troi’s “Delta City P.I.” events also for my own alternate reality version since we were collaborating on stories at one point.

Krystal stirred quietly still half asleep, and pulled the sateen (faux satin) sheets up over her shoulders to shield herself from the fan’s breeze.  As she started to drift back to sleep, she became aware of the muscular arm draped over her and the hand softly cupping her breast.  Instinctively she let out a soft, purring “Mmmm” and pressed her body lightly against the one behind her.  She awakened further as she felt the shaft of a fairly large and quickly hardening erection pressed against her rear.

No sooner had she felt the erection then another arm slipped underneath her, and both her breasts were being softly kneaded.  She let out a low moan of wanton pleasure, jutting her chest forward into the strong but gentle hands.  After a few moments, her hips began grinding against the erection pressed against her and she felt several soft kisses tracing their way up her shoulder towards her neck.

Krystal tilted her neck, pushing the side of her face into her pillow and opening herself up to further kisses along her neck and below her ear.  By the time the kisses had reached her ear lobe, she was panting with desire. 

She let out another long low moan and gasped a soft but hungry “Yes”.

No sooner had she done so then she was pulled onto her back with her amorous partner on top of her on all fours.  They kissed passionately as Krystal wrapped her legs hungrily around his waist, grinding her hips against his throbbing manhood.

It was only as they slowly broke their long, deep kiss that Krystal realized she didn’t remember going to bed with anyone, particularly not a man.  She had her relationship with Amazing Babe after all…  She opened her previously heavily lidded eyes and looked up.

It was Sully!

WHAT THE HELL?!? Krystal thought as panic set in.  How did THIS happen?

Sully, seemingly completely oblivious and lost in the moment, began kissing his way down the front of Krystal’s shoulder and across her breasts.  Krystal fought against the little surges of erotic lightning that raced from her breasts to her clit with every kiss.  She unwrapped her legs from Sully’s waist and put her hands on his broad chest, pushing with all her strength.

“Stop!” she half yelled, worried about drawing attention to them.

Sully muttered something that Krystal couldn’t quite make out with his face buried in her modest cleavage. 

Frustration set in, along with panic over possibly being discovered by Ms. Americana.  Krystal gave one last emotion fueled push and then slapped Sully across the face.

“Stop it, Sully!” Krystal yelled.  “Brenda will kill both of us, maybe literally.”

Sully shook his head and became fully aware of the situation.  “What the hell, Red?!?” he exclaimed.

“You tell me.” Krystal retorted.  “You’re the one on top of me.”

Sully scrambled off of Krystal and pulled the sheets over his lower half, awkwardly covering his pronounced erection with his hands on top of the sheets.

Krystal shook head and put her hand on her forehead.  “My head hasn’t felt this mushy since that tequila bender on the beach my freshman year.  What the hell happened, and why can’t I remember anything?”

Sully shook his head as well.  “I wish I knew.” He replied.  He looked around at the small room.  “I’d settle for just knowing where in the hell we are.”  “It looks like some sort of…”

“HOLY SHIT!” Krystal screamed, leaping out of the bed.  “Holy shit, holy shit!”  “I’m HOME!”  She jumped up and down a few times, pumping her fist in the air as she did.

A dumbstruck Sully watched her display as he tried to process the information.  “Wait a second, you mean, home home?” he finally managed.  “Like we’re all fairy tales where you come from home?”

Krystal nodded excitedly, an almost manic gleam in her eye.  “YES!  This is Village dorms at UC San Diego… where I was going to college before all this insanity started.”  She raced over to the window and looked outside.  “See?”  That’s Torrey Pines Scenic Drive across the street.  It leads to Black’s Beach.  I go down there and topless sunbath sometimes.  Occasionally a nighttime skinny dipping session in the ocean also.

“Uuhhhh, Red…” Sully stumbled.  “You… might want to put some clothes on before hanging around in front of the window like that.”

Yes, it’s a bikini, not lingerie. This IS a Rough Draft. 😛

“Pffft, who’s gonna see?” Krystal replied dismissively.  “Most of the students on this level are girls also, and the few boys here…  Well, The Geek is probably a better lay than any of them.”

“Krystal!” Sully exclaimed.  His face turned a shocked red, eliciting an amused snerk from Krystal.

“Sooner or later, you’re going to have to see that your ‘little sister’ is a grown woman, with all the needs and desires that go with that.” Krystal said.  Her amused smile only made Sully blush even more.

‘Yeah…” Sully started, then paused awkwardly.  “I’m having a hard time forgetting that at the moment.”

Krystal chuckled.  “That’s hard not to notice.  Little Sully isn’t so little.”  Seeing Sully’s fluster start to tilt towards anger, Krystal decided to back off.  She took a very brief moment to compose herself then continued to speak; her tone more serious this time.  “Look, I’m not sure how we ended up here, but nothing happened, I know that much”, she said.  “We both still have our underwear on, and while I’m turned on as hell, I can tell I haven’t had anyone inside me”. 

Krystal pursed her lips and looked down.  “As for what almost happened…”  “I suspect we can blame my aura of sexual energy for that.”  She paused for a couple of awkward moments.  “Nothing happened though, so… no harm no foul, right?”  She looked up with an embarrassed smile and hopeful eyes.

“Yeah…” Sully almost muttered, clearly embarrassed.  “I barely remember you warning Brenda and I about that…  It seems like weeks ago though.”  “I wonder how long we were out…”

“Long enough for you to soak up a major dose of that seductive energy.  Maybe just overnight though.  “I’m not famished or dehydrated, so it hasn’t been that long.”  Krystal looked around, lost in thought.  “Figuring out how to get back to Jessica and Brenda should be the main thing though.”

Sully let out a frustrated snort.  “You gonna wave your magic wand and blink us back into storybook land?” he asked.

Krystal shook her head.  “I get that you’re frustrated, but don’t take it out on me.”  She glanced over at the small desk near her bed.  “There’s my laptop… I can actually show you that I’ve been telling the truth.”  Krystal sat down at the desk and booted up her laptop, then let out an exasperated sigh.  “I swear Windows just did a massive OS update right before I poofed into Delta City”, she grumbled.

Krystal sat in the chair glaring at the computer, her arms crossed under her breasts and tapping her foot impatiently.

Sully shook his head slightly.  “Seriously, Red…  How about putting some clothes on?

Krystal let out an amused snort.  “I’ve got my underwear on, just like you.”

“Yours leaves little to the imagination though”, Sully replied.

“So do your boxer briefs… at least when you’re this happy to see me”, Krystal quipped with an amused smirk.  “Alright, alright…” Krystal said, hopping out of the chair and cutting off a retort from Sully.  She walked over to her dresser and stared at the outfit sitting on top of it.  “That’s… odd”

“What’s wrong, Red?”, asked Sully, pulling his jeans off the floor and sliding into them.

“I… always put my clothes out the night before…” Krystal said, clearly troubled.  It took a moment for her to find her voice again.  “This yoga outfit was the one I wore the day I disappeared.”  She held up the plain navy blue sports bra and stared at it for a moment before removing her sheer bra and slipping the sports bra on in its place.  “That outfit was lost when the Professor Whirter had me thrown in the asylum though”, she grumbled.

Sully seemed to be paying Krystal little attention as he found the rest of his clothes at the side of the bed and finished getting dressed.  “Credentials and gun are still here… good thing.  I’d hate to have to explain that to the Bureau…” he muttered.

Krystal took off the sheer panties she had been wearing and slipped on the knee length yoga pants.  She gave Sully a dirty look and let out an annoyed sigh.  “Men…”, she grumbled.

“What?” Sully asked.

“Nothing”, Krystal grumbled.  “Looks like the update is done”, she added.  She walked back over and sat down in front of the computer, then keyed in its password.  The system finished loading, and Krystal quickly pulled up her browser and keyed in DangerBabeCentral’s URL.

“Sunnovabitch… That’s Brenda!” Sully cursed as the home page came up.  “…and Green Spectre, Got Gal and Jungle Babe!”  Sully’s blood boiled as he saw the 3D renderings of Brenda getting violated seven ways to Sunday.  “I’m gonna kill somebody!” he fumed.

“Calm down”, Krystal replied in a mildly annoyed tone.  “I’ve told you before this isn’t the Truman Show.”  “The writers are just tapping into imagination to create kinky stories.”  “They have no idea that’s how it works either.”  “Tell them and they’d just thing it was airy fairy new age BS”.

Sully crossed his arms and grumbled.  “I guess it’s hard to argue that…  Brenda and I also thought yah hit your head too hard or something”.  “So, I’m in here also?” he asked, still trying to adjust to having his mind blown.

“Yeah…  Here…” Krystal replied as she jumped to Mister X’s page, then the stories section and then ComixFana’s page.  She got up and let Sully sit in front of the laptop.

Sully’s jaw nearly hit the floor as he skimmed through various stories.  “Who the hell is this Comics Fan and how the hell does he know every detail of every single intimate encounter I’ve had??  Even the stuff while I was separated from Brenda!”

“ComixFana…” Krystal corrected.  “And I have no idea.  It’s a screen name after all.”  “From what I gather, he… or she, I don’t know… is just somebody who wanted to bring a little civility to the website.  This was how I first learned about you though… and what you’d done for the She-Legion.”

Sully facepalmed and stared dumbfounded at all the various story authors listed.  “So… each one of these represents an alternate reality version of Brenda’s and my world… where the gals are being taken advantage of and abused?”

“It’s hard to say how many of them overlap, but yeah…  It’s a fair bet that some of them are alternates.” Krystal replied. 

“Enyo, what in the hell have you gotten me into??” Sully exclaimed, borderline despondent.

“No offense, Sully, but she is the goddess of the chaos and destruction of battle.” Krystal said.  “You kind of have to expect a mess like this from her.”

“That’s not the goddess I know, kid”, Sully replied grimly.  “Still with all this mess… not knowing where Brenda is, or if she’s OK, I’m having my moment of doubt here.”  Sully looked up at Krystal.  “Wait, what about here?” he asked in an almost frantic tone.  “You’re a powerful witch, this world must be overflowing with heroes we can recruit, right?”

Krystal gave Sully a sympathetic look.  “I wish it were that simple”, she replied.  “There are no superheroes here.”

“What??” Sully gasped.  “But you…”

Krystal cut him off in mid-sentence.  “This world is a… dead zone for lack of a better term.  What I can do magically in Delta City is a dream for me.  Here… well, magic is much weaker and manifests in much more subtle ways.  It’s easy to pass off as coincidence when you do see it.”

“I guess that explains what happened to your magical tattoo thing…” Sully replied.

Krystal glanced at the laptop screen, and the color drained from her face.  She let out a gasp and pointed at it.

“What’s wrong?”, Sully asked.

“Th… The date…”, Krystal stammered.  “It’s… the date Freya banished me!”  “We… can’t have gone back in time also!”  Krystal ran to the dresser and grabbed her iPhone, frantically swiping the screen and pulling up the calendar, then dropping it on the floor and taking a step back.  “It… is…” she said weakly.

Sully rushed over as he saw Krystal’s knees start to buckle, catching her and keeping her upright.

“I… I’m OK…” she managed.

“This could be a good thing though… Right, Red?” Sully asked.  “It means we’ve got our ticket back…”  “We can save Brenda and Jessica.”

“I… hope so”, Krystal replied.  “I’ve read so many weird theories about time travel, I don’t know what to think.”  “Goddess, I can’t believe I actually want to go back to that nightmare…”  “I can’t go through that asylum again, I just can’t…”

Sully put his hands on Krystal’s shoulders supportively.  “Don’t worry…  We’ll figure it out, somehow.”  “Soooo… what happened anyway?”, he asked.  “How did you end up getting banished to such a hellish version of our reality?”

“I… got into an argument with Freya.” Krystal said, sitting on the edge of the bed.  “She… popped up on my laptop and lectured me about not spending enough time being a good Wiccan.  I figured it was a scam and went total bitch on her.”  “Next thing I know I’m in the basement of Nightmare Manor in the middle of a brawl between Nightmare Witch and some of the She-Legion.”

“Ouch…”, Sully replied with a grimace.  “That doesn’t sound like you though.”  He sat down on the bed next to her.

Krystal offered a weak smile and brushed her hair out of her eyes.  “Trust me, I’m every bit the stereotypical wild redhead…  Let’s just say I’ve learned a little humility since that day.  I’d still never be going back there if it wasn’t for Jessica though.”

Sully nodded thoughtfully.  “What time did all this happen?”

“It was 3:05pm when I was banished”, Krystal replied.  “I’ll never forget that.”

“Cripes, so we have to wait 5 hours?” Sully asked.

“That’s if she even shows up this time around.” Krystal replied.

“Can’t you just invoke or summon her or whatever?” Sully asked.

“She’d never really made her presence known before that.” Krystal replied.  “I have no idea if she’ll even show at 3.  Alot has changed.”

Sully nodded and took a deep breath.  “Alright, we both have to stay calm and centered.  An idea will come to us if we do.  Let’s just try to noodle our way through it.”  “Uhm… one thing before I forget though…  Let’s not mention my previous dalliances to Brenda, OK?  We both have a ‘the past is the past’ thing with what happened while we were apart, but women can still be funny when they find out you’ve slept with their now friends.”

Krystal tilted her head for a moment.  “I’m not sure if I’d be pissed or intrigued… as long as it was before a relationship.  Yeah, I’ll keep quiet even though you’re probably worried about nothing.”

“Thanks.” Sully replied, looking quite relieved.  “Hmmm, something just dawned on me also…  How’d you get the name Witchfire anyway?  You use lightning more than anything.”

“It was never about my magic, it was about my fiery temper and bright red hair”, Krystal answered with an amused chuckle.

Sully laughed.  “That figures.  OK, so getting back to our return, let’s start at the beginning.  What would you need to make contacting Freya work?”

Krystal thought for a minute.  “I have my book of shadows here, and a good amount of ritual supplies like candles…  Mainly, I’d need time to purify myself and build some energy to weave the spell.”

“OK, that sounds promising!” Sully said as a smile retuned to his face.  “How long do you think that’d take?”

“Guaranteed success?”, Krystal asked.  “Probably a good day.  I feel weak as a kitten right now.”

“That may be too late”, Sully replied.  “My gut tells me we need to be back there no later than the time you first arrived.”

“Mine too, but if I botch the ritual due to lack of power, then I have to start all over again”, Krystal said.

“There’s got to be some other way to boost your batteries”, Sully said.  “Don’t you have some crystal or magic doodad?  You witches must have something for situations like this.”

Krystal chuckled.  “Actually, we do”, she replied.

Sully raised an eyebrow.  “So why are you giving me that look then?”  “What are we talking about here?”

“Tantra”, Krystal replied.

“You mean sex??” Sully asked, mildly shocked.  “What the hell, Red!”

“Actually, only some varieties of Tantra are sexual, but yes, that’s what I meant” Krystal replied with a wry chuckle.  “What did you expect?  I follow a sex goddess.  Besides, it’s not like I haven’t seen you undressing ‘little sister’ here with your eyes.  I know you’re… curious” 

“Looking ain’t touching”, Sully replied.  “Besides, I can blame that sex aura of yours on that.”

“Mmmhmmm…” Krystal replied with a not so coy grin.  She took a deep breath, then continued.  “Here’s the thing…  Circulating energy between two people in tantra doesn’t double the energy, it increases it exponentially when done right, and that wheel of energy gets stronger as it continues, kind of like a snowball rolling downhill.”

“I’m no expert on this stuff though”, Sully countered.  “Sure, I know a few tricks, but…”

“You don’t have to be, just let me take the lead energetically”, Krystal replied.  “And before you start in about Brenda, remember this is to get us back to her, and Jessica.”

Sully sighed.  “I suppose you’re right.  This is going to be weird though…”

Krystal flashed an evil grin.  “Don’t worry, by the time I’m done the last thing you’ll think of me is some little sister.  Who knows?  You might even forget about all those other girls like Lady Kraft”, she added with a wicked giggle.

“You may be good, but you’re no Brenda.” Sully retorted, answering Krystal’s challenge.

“I’m not looking to take her place.” Krystal replied flatly.  “Sex alone can never replace love.”  “Bet I can make you scream my name and admit I’m far better than her ladyship though.”  The wicked grin returned as she saw the growing bulge in Sully’s jeans.

“I’m tempted to make that a real bet, but I’ve seen how much tension your little bet with Night Raven has caused”, Sully replied, pulling off his jacket.  “I’m still not sure I like this, but it doesn’t look like we have much choice.  Where do we start?”

TO BE CONTINUED… JUST WHEN WE HIT THE FUN PART TOO, LOL

Witchfire’s Inspiration

It’s said every character’s creation was inspired by something or (more usually) someone. Witchfire is no exception. Meet Playboy’s Miss Aprl 2002; Heather Carolin.

Pretty much the epitome of the sultry redhead. I’ve had more than one friend who said they’d turn lesbian for her, LOL

Yes, she’s the feature model in the header photo here also.

For a better look at her, see Heather’s page in the Witchfire section.

Conan Era Story Published

I got a handful of likes on Twitter from a snippet of a Conan era story I wrote about a year or so ago.  Because of that, I decided to publish it here.  It’s only 2/3 done at this point, so I’ll need to finish it if it gets attention.

Playing the video game Conan: Exiles inspired this story.  Fair warning before anybody reads it also; the Hyborian age of Conan was 15,000 BC in the stories.  Thinking about bloodshed, violence and such were very different in that day and age.  ONLY read this story if you’re over 18 and can read it with that in mind.  The story is meant to be darkly realistic and NOT an endorsement of such behavior.

Conan – Tyche Defends Derketo’s Temple

Beyond that, there a few paragraphs that will serve as a quick primer for the story before the actual story itself…  The same place I usually put my disclaimers.

Witchfire Pt 8 Published

I finally got this one finished.  Krystal’s nearly losing her life to Count Ivanova on Halloween has major consequences when Hexanna blows off the near defeat.  Krystal’s up and down relationship with the She-Legion goes down again, and Amazing Babe reacts poorly to discovering Krystal’s true heritage.  In the middle of everything, the Aberration decides to tear up the town also.  Can anything be salvaged, and can Krystal continue to hold everything together on her own?

Witchfire, Pt 8 – Reinforcements

Hope everyone enjoys.

Witchfire Halloween RetCon Published

For those not familiar with it, RetCon is shorthand for ‘Retroactive Continuity’.  It’s a term that first came about in comic book circles.  They occur when the writers have mucked up a story so badly that they need to rewrite a chunk of existing history.  Sometimes they just happen when a writer  thinks they have a better idea to tell a story in a more modern way.  I’ll spare my opinion of most of those efforts.

Getting back on track, I had very limited information on Mister X’s character Hexanna when I wrote the first version of this story.  I tried to take some creative liberties and made her a character with a magic staff who didn’t actually believe in magic.  I thought it would be an interesting contradiction to explore.  Probably a bad idea to start with, and once I learned more about Hexanna’s character, I decided a re-write was in order.

Without getting preachy, I feel that if somebody writes fan fiction, they should keep it as true to form as possible to the work of the original author.  Ergo, I’m doing what I can to humanize and add some depth to the characters, but I do NOT want to change long established canon about them.  Nuff said. 🙂   Here’s the story:

Witchfire, Pt 7 – Halloween RetCon

As the name might suggest, the re-write also lets me fit the story more properly into the existing story line also.  Readers will have to suffer through an added sex scene too. 😉

Witchfire Pt 6 Finally Done!

Considering parts 5 & 6 were supposed to just be a more detailed account of the events that were summarized at the end of Chapter 4, they turned into a monster.  Chapter 6 is 16,712 words long, and has a few sex scenes, a few fight scenes, and A literal ton of plot and character advancement.

Witchfire Pt 6 – Revelations

Things should start falling together for readers, giving them a better idea of the shape of things in MY version of Delta City.  I’ve made a real effort to create a world with some depth and grit without going total emo melodrama.

As always, comments and feedback are welcome and encouraged. 🙂

And for those still not up on the characters, here’s Mister X’s heroines fact sheets page.

That specific page is fairly tame, but be warned that other parts of his site are solidly NSFW.

Witchfire Pt 5 Posted!

This took far longer than I anticipated, but chapter 5 is finally out.  This one is covering the events that were just skimmed over at the end of chapter 4.  I felt that was a sloppy wrap up and I wanted to do something more proper.  Chapter 6 will conclude that series of events and lead into the Halloween story I did.  THAT will hopefully be ready next week.  For now, enjoy chapter 5

Witchfire, Pt 5

Chapter 6 will have more fighting and sex.