And a day and a half earlier than it will appear at DangerBabeCentral…
This long chapter (38 pages) brings Witchfire’s initial foray into the world of superheroes to a close. Krystal and her ragtag group prepare to make their assault on Dragon Queen’s hidden base and rescue the She-Legion. Whose side is Geek really on though, and how far will he go to achieve his objectives? Who is the mysterious group backing Dragon Queen?
Most importantly, does Krystal have what it takes to be a heroine, especially when the time comes to make the tough choices?
Addenda: As of this morning (Oct 31, 2018), I’ve gone through and proof read the story yet again, and cleaned up several typos and reworded a few things for better story flow and sentence structure. I’ve also added a picture of the statue or figurine of the goddess Morrigan that inspired Witchfire’s costume. It appears in the story immediately after Witchfire is given her costume.
I’ve tried thus far to avoid posts that are not actually stories. That said, I did want to let the readers I have attracted know that I plan to continue here. No posting a few stories and quitting like many bloggers.
That said, this blog was always intended to kick-start a writing career. Most of my future writing will be going on sites like Amazon, Barnes & Noble and Smashwords for sale. Everything will be priced pretty cheap. A few consumer reporters and others have said sell at $1. People will take a chance on something at that price. So that’s what single stories will run for. Really long stories or collections of shorts will be more, but still affordable.
I do plan to continue to post some free original content here, as well as samples of anything that does get published for sale. I think doing so is good marketing, and a nice way to say thank you to my readers.
Fan Fiction type stories using others’ characters & settings is something I can and will continue to do here as well. I can’t legally or morally use those characters to make money, but just spinning some fun tales to improve my writing never hurts. I’ll be branching out there also, not just doing superhero stuff.
It SEEMS like my original stuff is more popular, which I can understand. Most fan fiction is drivel. I’ve tried to inject some reality and depth into even characters as trite as the ones from DangerBabeCentral however. If you’re not normally one to read fan fiction, I hope you’ll give my stuff a look.
Lastly, regarding my requests for constructive feedback… If anyone is nervous there about what I meant, it’s the textbook definition. You can email and tell me what did or didn’t work for you. Just do it without being overly harsh or negative. I can’t promise I’ll agree with everything I may get, but I’ll certainly give it all fair consideration.
As an added note, let me know what you all like with my stories thus far. Feel free to share and tell others also. The more feedback and views I get, the more motivated I’m going to be to develop more stories. 😉
I’m not sure which of my stories are more popular right now, but it SEEMS like the superheroine peril stuff is getting the most attention. Either way, that’s what’s clicking mentally at the moment, sooooo…
Today I finished Witchfire, Part 3 – Azure Angel’s Destruction. This bit of extreme kink features the young busty ninja getting caught sneaking into the captured She-Legion base. She then foolishly challenges Dragon Queen to single combat for leadership of her army. After losing the fight, Azure Angel is completely dominated by Dragon Queen, who forces orgasm after orgasm from her until she’s broken.
Meanwhile, Krystal assumes the mantle of Witchfire and the remaining free heroines prepare to storm the base. Will they arrive in time?
Power Girl’s Power Date was a long project (roughly 40 pages in Word) that I’d finished about a week ago when I first set up this blog. The story wasn’t bad, but I was in too big a hurry to get it posted after going almost two years without writing anything.
After some quality feedback, I did a modest re-working of the story. I made Power Girl a bit less neurotic, cut out a bit of redundant dialog here and there, and added a couple new parts that better address Marc knowing Kara’s secret identity, and him asking her for advice on an important project to show he was more than talk about admiring her intellect. Said project may become an important part of a future story also.
The one thing I didn’t take serious steps to address was Marc appearing too perfect. It’s a romance story set in a world where there’s a guy that can push planets around, is one of the smartest beings on the planet, works selflessly to help others and finds it near impossible to lie. Sooooo… Marc isn’t too unrealistic compared to Superman. Besides, every girl deserves to find an amazing guy.
The new story is probably 85% the same, so I’ll leave it to the reader to decide if they think it’s worth another run through. I personally think the new version is a much better read however:
Yes, I finished part 2 already. It’s what seems to be flowing mentally right now, so that’s what I’m writing. I’m still hoping to return to other stories in the VERY near future, but for now, you get this a week and half before it MAY appear at DBC
This chapter will address some (but not all) of the unusual behavior of the She-Legion towards Krystal in the first chapter. There’s FAR more going on than even has been revealed here however. Read on and see how our Strawberry Blonde witch escapes her predicament.
New story time! Part 1 of my new superheroine peril fan fiction based on the DangerBabeCentral.com characters and world. The series will definitely be a walk on the kinky side. Read the disclaimers on the top of the story’s page before continuing.
Also, I got some very good feedback on the Power Girl fan fiction and will be doing a rewrite there very soon. As a spoiler, there’s also going to be an evil version at some point. ComixFana and I have been batting around my plot there for ages.
Next project absolutely will be the Jillian sequel. I was just lacking in inspiration there the last few days. I intend to do my best to keep a balance between the fan fiction stuff and “normal” erotica.